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feelingsundefined's avatar

Nothing more to say, simply PERFECT!

theinkspilled's avatar

Thank you so much❤️‍🔥

conejita's avatar

i love love this one!!

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Thank you!!!

Beckie Baybeck's avatar

"The clock stutters like a liar caught mid-word." ♥️

theinkspilled's avatar

I really love that line❤️‍🔥

Olivia Lloyd-Jones's avatar

‘if hell is repetition sleep is its apprentice’ — hauntingly good (not to mention accurate). The whole thing is a soul-stirring description of sleep. Looking forward to more like this please!!

theinkspilled's avatar

I actually have another poem coming out today I think about the heavy burden of nightmares, sleep deprivation and insomnia!!

Thank you so much for your kind words❤️‍🔥

Olivia Lloyd-Jones's avatar

I have saved and will be reading shortly🤍

Mancee Elendew's avatar

Such a good one.

Night time can be horrible for many of us... but I like to think there is somehow hope...

theinkspilled's avatar

That’s absolutely true and I do hold hope despite everything!

Mancee Elendew's avatar

Hope is essential.

Cedar Jones's avatar

You are on an absolute roll. I'm so glad you crossed my feed and that I subscribed to you. Keep up the beautiful work.

theinkspilled's avatar

Thank you so much!! I’ve been publishing a poem a day since I started here (not even two months ago) and I just love it. I’m really glad we connected too!

Justin Fig's avatar

Those first 3 lines.....just DAMN! Read it over like 5 times! Great work!

theinkspilled's avatar

Thank you so much Justin!!

yl's avatar

I love love loved reading this <33